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The sorrow of rebirth by ~Harkan-no1:iconHarkan-no1:



*In the middle of a forest lies a crystal. This crystal is not like any other because it is believed to be a holy crystal and the embodyment of an ancient goddess. On certain ocassions during the year there is a cloud covering the wholle forrest and the city at the edge of it. Some say it is the goddess in the crystal that is sorrowfull, some say its a blessing given by her. Because of the rain water during those time the village has never been sick or lacking food and water. The children, nor the elder know why the goddess has been incased in the crystal. But they feel her presence inside, like a warmth that pierces the very soul. Whille the area where the crystal is sealed of by the elders, the children have always been curious about it and never afraid to sneak in there to pray for her. Each time they pray they feel the warmth even stronger, only this time as if it was enveloping them in a hug.*
The story starts with a young boy in love with a girl the same age. He was in charge of helping the adults with their job so he was sometimes free to do what he wanted. On the other hand she was occupied most of the day, tending to the kitchen with her mom . During those times he usualy stands outide the kitchen window and talks to her. At first she was to shy to talk to him, but as the weeks went by they got closer and more in love with each other. Then one day...
-Hey....heyyyy......you know you cant sleep there.*he slowly opens his eyes and sees his love next to him*
-.....Why not, Alesa.....the other workers are resting over there.
-YOU just cant.
©2008-2009 ~Harkan-no1
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Author's Comments

A litle story i started to wrote like... 8 months ago... and plan to start writing the rest of it.. one of these days. A fantasy story, with lots of fights hehehehe

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:icontsukijin:
Oi, it was good man, any chance that you'll upload the rest?

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:iconharkan-no1:
hehehe, yeah. I plan to write more of this soon. And tnx^^
:icontsukijin:
cool, I'll keep an eye out for it. ^^

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